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My first poem for Criss angel...!! composed in 15 minutes...

June 11, 2008

These are my True feelings for Criss..

Criss I tell you, who are You...

For me, You are a world so true..

A passing wind that touched me from inside..

Heart offers a prayer that is You..

A light that brightens my soul..

A feeling that excites me is You..

A strange quest... an unknown thirst..

To live life..the Hope is You..

The search of my Sight.. The zeal of my Heart..

The Heaven of my land is only You..

The relief of my mind..The spring of my Life..

That I wished from my heart, The Love is You..!!!!!!!!!

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    • Photo of koko koko
      koko
      Female, 15
      doha, QA
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      never believe you'r eyes
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      Posted 5 months ago by koko

      kool the so nice hun keep going ur job ;-))

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      JeanieAnn
      Female, 42
      Tempe, AZ
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      Feeling blessed and....VEGAS BOUND! Have an awesome weekend everyone!!!
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      Posted 5 months ago by JeanieAnn

      Very nice! And only in 15 minutes? But when you are writing from the heart it is the most inspired, I suppose.

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      Mindfreakwitch
      Female, 28
      Kaiserslautern, DE
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      A sad Poet with a good heart writes for an Angel !!!!
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      11/22/08
      Posted 5 months ago by Mindfreakwitch

      Sweet totally Sweet.